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30 September 2007 @ 12:26 pm
The Snowball Effect. [6/?]  

Title: The Snowball Effect.
Author: </a></b></a>softballie  
Rating: Pg 13
Summary: Read the damn story.
Disclaimer: I don't own Panic! Yet....

[Chapter 6]

Spencer looked at me.

“Spencer, Want to see that day through my eyes?” I asked harshly, not really asking.

He nodded.

“Spencer, I did like you like that,” I said, rubbing my face.

He’s eyes widened and his jaw dropped.

“Spencer, I lost my best friends, my only friends. That day was hell. I had no one. I was so confused, and I started cutting myself!” I exclaimed. I showed Spencer my scared wrists. “Spencer, I felt like shit. I felt worthless to everyone. When I disappeared, I was put away, Spencer. You ruined my life. Everything went downhill from there. Spencer, If you hadn’t done that, I wouldn’t be Ashlee Simpson’s lackey. You have no idea what you really did, It was a Snowball effect,” I said.


I shouted.

Spencer looked like he was on the verge of tears. “I’m……………So so sorry,” he whispered, shaking his head.

“Well, that isn’t going to fix my life Spencer,” I spat. “If you had just pulled you head out of your ass, You would have seen I liked you too,” I whispered. I was crying.

Tears were pouring down my face.

Spencer pulled his sleeve into his hand and wiped the tears from my eyes.

I pushed his arm away. “Spencer Smith, You’re a jackass and I hope you die a horrible painful death,” I hissed, slapping him across the face as hard as I could.

Spencer looked at me. His lip quivered.

Tears fell from his eyes. “I guess I deserve it,” he muttered.

I growled at him and walked out of the room quickly.

Ryan grabbed my arm as I tried to walk out of the flat. “What the hell?” he asked.

“Ask Spencer,” I spat, pulling away from him. I ran out of the flat and down the crowded streets of New York City for as long as I could.

Current Location: Somewhere
Current Mood: cheerfulcheerful
Current Music: Seed- TAI
Jackikiwi_muffins on October 2nd, 2007 02:27 am (UTC)
Ahhh! I still love it but -sniff sniff- so sad! anyway yay good job (:
tunny_romance on October 5th, 2007 06:45 pm (UTC)
*shocked* Why did she do that?

If I can give you a hint, try to put more descriptions in your story, it's easier for your readers to imagine where your characters are located/situated.

This is good, and me likes :)

More soon?